Your idea is really excellent and well described. I really love a lot about these photos, the composition is good, they are well edited and they are interesting! I especially like the second photo with the girl raising her arms in the air. Too often photos have a somber mood and I like that you integrated some happy in your mini-concentration. The only think I don’t like as much is the girls in the mind aren’t the girl who is thinking about the moment. I think the photos would be more powerful if the same 3 girls were both the girls in each photo, if that makes sense. Like the girl thinking about the grave is the same girl that is sitting by the grave. Anyway, good differences in moods and good photos!
The description kind of makes sense, but I can’t tell if the girl is thinking about the other girl or the emotions associated with what the other girl is doing. . Overall the concept is a good idea but the execution was a bit lacking. The photos are good in composition but do girls think about frolicking in leaves often? Haha. The first photo is probably the best, as the silhouette is the most clear for that photo. The second picture was not so good because so much of the photo underneath is visible. It could be improved by making it more clear what goes on in the girl’s head.
Your description well describes the kinds of pictures you are taking. I really liked the first one, I like it because you can really see the person on the outside, the person’s face and you can see the person on the inside, which makes it seem more relatable. I think my least favorite picture is the second one because You can barely see the outside person, and it makes it seem almost like just a photo of the person happy. You could improve it by making the person on the outside darker. Other than that, these photos were great.
The description matches the photos. Overall I like all the photos. My favorite one is the one of the girl throwing leaves in the air. My least favorite one is the girl sitting. I would improve the photos by changing them to have more emotion in the first one because I don’t get how that goes threw a girls head. good job!
Your idea is really excellent and well described. I really love a lot about these photos, the composition is good, they are well edited and they are interesting! I especially like the second photo with the girl raising her arms in the air. Too often photos have a somber mood and I like that you integrated some happy in your mini-concentration. The only think I don’t like as much is the girls in the mind aren’t the girl who is thinking about the moment. I think the photos would be more powerful if the same 3 girls were both the girls in each photo, if that makes sense. Like the girl thinking about the grave is the same girl that is sitting by the grave. Anyway, good differences in moods and good photos!
ReplyDeleteThe description kind of makes sense, but I can’t tell if the girl is thinking about the other girl or the emotions associated with what the other girl is doing. . Overall the concept is a good idea but the execution was a bit lacking. The photos are good in composition but do girls think about frolicking in leaves often? Haha. The first photo is probably the best, as the silhouette is the most clear for that photo. The second picture was not so good because so much of the photo underneath is visible. It could be improved by making it more clear what goes on in the girl’s head.
ReplyDeleteYour description well describes the kinds of pictures you are taking. I really liked the first one, I like it because you can really see the person on the outside, the person’s face and you can see the person on the inside, which makes it seem more relatable. I think my least favorite picture is the second one because You can barely see the outside person, and it makes it seem almost like just a photo of the person happy. You could improve it by making the person on the outside darker. Other than that, these photos were great.
ReplyDeleteThe description matches the photos. Overall I like all the photos. My favorite one is the one of the girl throwing leaves in the air. My least favorite one is the girl sitting. I would improve the photos by changing them to have more emotion in the first one because I don’t get how that goes threw a girls head. good job!
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